I wanted to change the photo I used in my rough cut as I got feedback from my teacher and class mates saying the the pose the model was pulling looked too aggressive for the indie genre. I had also realised that the model didn't match the front cover model, which is why I decided to take some photos of my model I used on the front cover, so that I could use another photo of her on my double page spread, however for the time being, I added a different photo until I decided on the appropriate photo to use.



I also added more conventions I had missed out- the page number. Along with the page number, I added the name of the magazine and the date the magazine was issued. I also added a orange line (keeping the running house style) below the bottom of the text so it is separated form the main article text. I ensured that the page number of this article matched the contents page, talking about the interview.


Here is a overall comparison of my rough cut double page spread and mid -to- final cut of my double page spread.
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