Saturday 18 March 2017

Vital peer feedback

While I was showing one of my peers my magazine, I asked them to give me some feedback of how they think I could improve it.
I showed them my front cover and double page spread and asked them to give me some general feedback.

Me peer said that on my front cover, I have a photo of model (X) with the name 'Abi Sparks' underneath (him presuming that model (X) on the front cover was Abi Sparks) but then when looking at my double page spread, there was a photo of a model (Y), which was slightly confusing. 
I took his advice on board and decided that when I retake my photos, I will discard of Model (Y) and only use model (X) on both my front cover and double page spread. 

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